Hi Mya, my name is Kyra and I am a Year 8 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I like your post about NZ because of the cool poster/flag that you have made.
Maybe next time you could add in a description of what you had to do and why, so the readers are slightly more informed. What was your favourite part about making this flag? How did you make it? Great work!
Hi Mya, I am a year 6 from Te Hapara School. Maybe next time you should add in a description of what you had done so the readers would know what you had done. I like your post because it is interesting.
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Hi Mya, my name is Kyra and I am a Year 8 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I like your post about NZ because of the cool poster/flag that you have made.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could add in a description of what you had to do and why, so the readers are slightly more informed. What was your favourite part about making this flag? How did you make it? Great work!
Kyra
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeleteI am a year 6 from Te Hapara School.
Maybe next time you should add in a description of what you had done so the readers would know what you had done. I like your post because it is interesting.
hi mya
ReplyDeletethat i really cool flag.
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