What I did in the holiday program and what the holiday program was about and what I enjoyed and what was hard for me.
What I enjoyed about the writing is that I got to choose what I was writing about and what I found hard was trying to remember the stuff that I did and what to write about and also what I found hard was trying to use words that would hook the reader. What the holiday program was about learning how to play netball and it was for people the don’t know netball that while.A thing I did in the holiday program was trying to shoot and to learn how to defend people.
EXAMPLE
THE NETBALL HOLIDAY PROGRAM
I walk through the netball court gate I see people from different schools talking to each other. I think what am I getting myself into.THen I see Rylee,Bri,Hannah,Millie and Paige standing in a group altogether they run towards me with smiles on each others faces they all look very enthusiastic to do this Rylee says to me
“Are you going both days or just today”
I replied with
“I don’t know”
then we hear whistle blow we see Crystal come out (Crystal is the person teaching us)we sit on the stairs and listen to the values of the game one value was sportsmanship and that you have to encourage other players EG(if they drop the ball you don’t say they are useless you say it’s ok at least you tried) then we had a game after we got our techniques right.After we had a game we had to go home but I went to Rylee’s house first we had to drop Millie off at her house.
Thank you for sharing your holiday writing. It is great to learn a new sport, but it can also be a little scary at first to learn a new skill. You explained really well how your friends made a new situation so much better and easier for you.
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How many goals did you manage to get?
Do you think you will continue to play netball?
What other sports do you enjoy?
Kia ora, I am Aleasha from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked I love your writing it is interesting.
I learnt that you have a big passion for netball.
Maybe you could you can tell us were you do you netballprogram
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Hi Mya,this is a really great speech, although, I think you could write, a bit more, of what you did, juring, the programe.
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